Release Day Review: ‘Friday Night Alibi’ by Cassie Mae #NARC13

Book Cover Friday Night Alibi by Cassie MaeThe Low Down: Church-going, sweet little rich girl Kelli uses her good rep to create alibis for her fellow high school students so they can date who they really want to and get to keep their large trust funds. Cue entrance of smirky jerky Chase who she immediately dislikes with a passion. But, of course, he is everywhere and is everything her distracted parents would not want in a boyfriend for their daughter.

Best Thang ‘Bout It: The idea was certainly intriguing, but before I knew it, it just turned into your typical surface-y smug boy meets disapproving girl and said girl has to get past her own insecurities to see love RIGHT IN FRONT OF HER.

I’m Cranky Because: Sometimes repetition of themes or phrases works well in a story, sometimes not. There seemed to be a lot of talk about how Christian so-and-so was or that something wasn’t Christian blah blah blah…it was too much. I got that in the first two seconds that was the main character’s “thang.” I felt like I was being hit over the head with it; was it merely there to explain why there was no sex in the book? The problem was that as soon as Christianity would be mentioned, the next sentence would have “dick” or “jackhole” in it, spoken (or thought) by the supposed Christian main character.

The talk of oranges and popcorn got old fast, too. And there are some revelations about Chase that really seem to happen way too late in the story for it to change my feelings about him (or care).

In relation to this, there was also a lot of “I can’t believe I just thought that/said that/remembered that” every time Kelli would find herself thinking of the jerky Chase. This was supposed to show the reader how much she couldn’t control her feelings about him, which, I guess, was supposed to show how real they were? This device was certainly overplayed.

The characters were pretty one-note; there was no depth. I didn’t particularly like either main character, and I could never quite believe the cocky ass Chase transforming into the sweet caring Chase. It was like there were two distinct people; perhaps an evil twin?

Don’t get me started on the nicknames they had for each other…gah.

The Bottom Line: There are much better romances out there that will fulfill your boy-meets-girl needs.

Tiny Rant: Do a lot of authors use this “New Adult” genre so their characters can have sex (in detail)? Yes they do. Is it a good thing? Depends. If your story is about /centered around/involving romance and sex, then yes, it’s legit. So, for those of you who don’t want to write about that, then don’t. Write about all the other things that are “New Adult:” going to college, living alone for the first time, deciding on your major, traveling, getting your first job…the list is endless. Or, like in many ADULT books, when the characters are heading in that direction, fade to black. You don’t have to tell details. Or, if your characters aren’t going to do that, then don’t put them in those situations. It’s the very definition of a tease. Even Jane Austen knew how to make people smoulder. And you know they were waiting ’til marriage.

Friday Night Alibi by Cassie Mae was published today by Flirt. A free copy of this book was given to Ink and Page in return for an honest review. Big thanks to NetGalley/the Publisher/the Author.

Rating: 2

Genre: New Adult/Young Adult Fiction Contemporary Romance
Ages: 14 and up
You Might Want to Know: I am classifying this as NA/YA because the main characters are out of high school. However, there isn’t any sex. There is drinking and talk of sex, but it is very benign.

Other Reviews:
Goodreads
Bookpushers: F @thebookpushers)
Rachel Morgan: (@RachelMorgan13)

Find the Author:
Author’s Website/Blog
Author on Twitter (@CassieCook2)
Author on Facebook

Buy the Book:
Amazon

 

3 thoughts on “Release Day Review: ‘Friday Night Alibi’ by Cassie Mae #NARC13”

  1. I got this book from Netgalley, too, but haven’t read it. I’m thinking I might pass. I don’t think I would like all the Christian pushing. I respect people’s beliefs completely, but I hate being preached to.

    I don’t mind there being sex in books, even if there is some detail. But I wish New Adult wasn’t only books with lots of sexytimes.

    Sorry this was a disappointment.

    1. It wasn’t so much the “Christian pushing” as using being Christian as a measurement of someone’s worth. It really just showed the lack of depth in the characters. It seemed like it was used to show how out of the ordinary her thoughts and feelings were for Chase. Like, “I don’t normally think naughty thoughts or do inappropriate things, but something new is happening to me and I am going to try and not think about his abs/sex/whatever but if I can’t, it’s not my fault, ’cause I know it’s wrong yet some unseen force is making me so I’ll just give in even though I would never normally do this but since I mentioned 500 times how I am a good Christian girl, you won’t think badly of me…blah blah blah. Oh, and he’s a dick.”

      That makes it SUPER clear, no? 🙂

      It’s a device to make a character do the opposite of what they would normally do, thus making the story. It was definitely overused here!

      I have no problem with sex in books; but when that’s all you have driving a story, sometimes it’s just not enough.

      As usual, Quinn…simpatico city.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *